but why not happy ending for kanna. heh heh heh
I must say i really love this chapter, and I know the following chapters will not disapoint. This is by far one of the best stories i found in some time. You fit everything in line, everything lines up, and everything is so great and refreashing to read. Amazing, and good job, i will be following this story.
Much love, Camille Lynn.
Tasha (Chapter 6) - Sun 21 Apr 2013
This was a great story ^w^ I think I'll go enjoy your other stories now.
E (Chapter 6) - Sun 24 Feb 2013
Once again, you've done it again.Another again story
E (Chapter 5) - Sun 24 Feb 2013
He had no good reason, and only brought his deathwish with him the second he attacked her. Knowing Sesshomaru, it's definitely going to be painful
E (Chapter 4) - Sun 24 Feb 2013
Aww....and aww. Though I find it off Sesshomaru saw Sango naked, it's clear he only has eyes for Kagome.
E (Chapter 2) - Sun 24 Feb 2013
Wow....WOW.....JUst wow. Now, that was hot. I swear you have a gift when it comes to writing the heated moments.
E (Chapter 1) - Sun 24 Feb 2013
Wow...just wow. That's I can say to describe what I read. And that was only the first chapter.
Nat Moore (Chapter 6) - Mon 15 Oct 2012
truly inspirational, a story that had some very deep meanings to it, amazing job and a very very well done :)
katrina susan (Chapter 1) - Thu 20 Sep 2012
love it!
Channa (Chapter 6) - Mon 09 Jul 2012
one thing is for certain, you have quite the talent for writing! love ur stories!
~Kitty(AKA: Inuyasha'z Girlfriend)
I VERY much enjoyed this fanfiction. I bore easily and when fanfictions are written in a way where they go on a more than a short while after the initial 'get-together', so to speak, I lose interest. With this one, however, I could not help but continue reading; I had to know what would happen! Thank you so much for your beautiful contribution to the world of SessXKag Fanfiction!
Pebbles (Chapter 5) - Wed 18 Apr 2012
That was very intense, the entire chapter!! It touched on all subjects and ones I didn't even consider so much. There was so much insight and unmasked honesty that even I felt overwhelmed. From his declaration of love for her (and to her) without saying the words to the home he provided. It made you want to believe that there's such a thing meant for everyone: the highest form of affectionate love. So awesome. I'm glad that you kept her innocence as part of her personality. She is still humble, shy and unsure of herself. Gradually building her confidence is more appropriate for her character.
I'm also aware that as much as he's changed, he's still Sesshomaru. That makes sense. And they, why would you want to change him too much? The line about him being the end of the circle of life was perfect. Makes you remember that he is an, if not thee, ultimate force to deal with. That should not change. It would definitely go against his character and the very plot of the story. He is still darkness illuminated.
Awesome, awesome, awesome!!
Pebbles (Chapter 4) - Sat 14 Apr 2012
This plot twist makes everything so...wow. Guess that's how I can describe it since I'm in awe of it.
I appreciate that with everything that has occurred, everyone's reaction to the change is subtlely expressed. From Shippo to Kaede. Everyone was effected. You actually feel much sympathy for Inuyasha. Stories like this could easily turn him into Inuyasha: the idiotic and unwitting villain, but you re-introduce Inuyasha: the victim. It makes so much sense. It will play out what type of relationship Sesshomaru and Kagome will have and how they all grow.
And speaking of growth, Sesshomaru's internal monolouge with himself was touching. Far more touching then you would expect. So the changes within him are appreciated more by readers towards his claim of her. His fondness for Inuyasha now is a great example of his personal growth and now more giving nature due to Kagome.
It doesn't hurt that he's...uh...superseductivelyfantasticallygorgeoushotman. Yea I said it. Or wrote it.. can't undo it.
Pebbles (Chapter 3) - Fri 13 Apr 2012
O_O You say "little plot twist?" HOLY JEEBUS that was BIG. HUUUUUGE. I mean like. 'BLAMMO!! There goes all the thoughts of where you THOUGHT this story was heading.' Awesome.
Pebbles (Chapter 2) - Fri 13 Apr 2012
This felt like a whirlwind!! Poor thing lost her only way home and then gets a new one. He caters to her needs cause he wants her and she is swept away. There was so much going on with a good pace. And man, if I could recall a first time like that...I'd freakin die happy. That. Was. HOT!! Good job. Jealousy arising out of me made me laugh so hard. Kudos for that. lol
I'm glad there wasn't any dancing around the subject of definites. Her (and him) asking the poignant questions was a good thing since it's what everyone wanted to know anyways.
The demise of Naraku was gonna happen, sure, but you left a tinge of regret in an unlikely place that mattered so much. Because he was a being that still wanted love, just didn't know how to attain it. That was moving. And what of the others, especially Kagura? Ooooh, she does jealous b---- very well.
Nice chapter
Pebbles (Chapter 1) - Fri 13 Apr 2012
I'll admit, I was on the fence about such an idea of whether or not a Naraku-Sesshomaru battle for her affections would work. However, I'm intrigued by it because of it's originality. And what pulls me the most is that it seems like more of just a physical attraction that makes her 'call' out to them. I'm a sucker for the deeper connection stories. =p Some parts do feel to be a bit out of character. Although I didn't pay attention to what universe you are choosing to stick with. Plus, that's not to say it's not part of the story. So I'm just speculating. The story has potential and I'm reading to the end!!
I'm really liking this!
*i swear. .you just know how to end a story. . just. .
wowwww. . thanks:)*
LLLOOOVVVEEEDDDD IIIITTTT! It was a beautiful love story between Sesshoumaru and Kagome. Wonderfully written. Thank you for writing it.
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