Reviews for The Flower Girl by Kanna37

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Firehauke (Chapter 100) - Wed 03 Mar 2010

This was an excellent story, one of the best out there.  Thanks for the wrap up, it was a good final look at everyone.


laenfante (Chapter 100) - Wed 03 Mar 2010

You have a magnificent achievement here, full of emotion. I've laughed, cried, cheered, and smiled through the entire story. Thank you for your hard work; it's been amazing. Take your bow...

 

BRAVO!!! (standing ovation)


Inumaru_Rapture (Chapter 100) - Wed 03 Mar 2010

Aww! What a happy ending!!  I'm so sad to see it finished, but I'm so thrilled you made it 100 chapters!  -hug!- I can't wait to see what you have in store for us with your next story!


Happy2SeeAll (Chapter 100) - Wed 03 Mar 2010

You did an absolutely wonderful job on this story. Thank you for sharing it with us!


Mskumiko (Chapter 100) - Wed 03 Mar 2010

I loved reading this story & I love how u used the flowers to say think  great job :)


theunknownchild (Chapter 100) - Wed 03 Mar 2010

Yay! Awesome finish for an awesome story! How you came up with so many ways to use each flower and make it into a well written story boggles my mind, but I enjoyed it none the less :)


lady_myth (Chapter 100) - Wed 03 Mar 2010

*blubbers*

 

This was wonderful. Thank you so much for the story! I <3 it very much! Congrats on reaching 100, and producing one of the finest pieces of Fanfiction I've ever read. I cannot wait to see what more you have to offer us. I think it is safe to say that you have nestled your name beside the artists of Fanfiction of Sunset Miko, LadyB, Youkai Yume, and such. Congratulations. And best of luck in all that you do!


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 99) - Mon 01 Mar 2010

*giggles at you* i will make it worth your while :3


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 98) - Mon 01 Mar 2010

i likes this :3


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 98) - Sun 28 Feb 2010

awwww!  *^_^*  I love you for this chapter!


SilentlyFuming (Chapter 97) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

Yay~, to 100!  X3  (ah-random thought- you should have one chapter (or a chunk of one) just for Rin, since she is the 'Flower Girl' *^_^*)


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 97) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

o.o well you just cant stop at 97 >_< !!! you hafta get to one hundred! anyway i like this, i think it is wrappign up thus far, nicely ^_^


loveyaa (Chapter 96) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

Ahhh...it was fun while it lasted but I guess that all good things must come to an end :)


chevonne knowles (Chapter 96) - Sat 27 Feb 2010

I would like to have seen kagome fry a few folks. that would have been funny!!!!!!!!!


2lazy2login (Chapter 96) - Fri 26 Feb 2010

eeh, the last chapter?  but you're so close to 100!  seriously, you can do it!  XP


sugar0o who lurks (Chapter 96) - Fri 26 Feb 2010

o.o you cant have a final one! you hafta resolve miro/sango, as well as bebe's for kanna/inu and SK, and you never did have Sessmomma meet kagome =x >_> you got enough to make it to 100!!!


Naraku (Chapter 63) - Fri 26 Feb 2010

Pfft.. No no no... I'd have to agree with Sesshoumaru-sama on this one... Females.. ¬¬


mary (Chapter 94) - Thu 25 Feb 2010

hahaha! score one for kagome. great move girl! 


suki (Chapter 92) - Thu 25 Feb 2010

It´s a good story but sometimes it´s really corny and all the happily after is boring and kinda predictable. I still don´t get why every character has to be paired up with someone. Some characters should first grow before they have a relationship like Inuyasha or even Sango, kami that girl is annoying.

The children act too much as grown ups. As sweet and sometimes wise children can be they are still children and some things can´t be understood by them yet and I felt you had exaggerated with their knowledge. I work with children and know that they are sensitive when it comes to emotions but you had the children act as adults and have knowledge that they shouldn´t have. Children learn through models and the first models children have in their lives are their parents for the first decade so your portrayal of the orphans are not really believable. At least Shippo is technically older and could know some things that human children don´t. Rin is a sweet girl but still a simple girl with a normal background for that time, that means she had a peasant family and no education. If she learned something from her family it would be what she had to do to survive with their roles in life.

Don´t take this as a flame because it wasn´t meant to be one. It´s just my opinion based on experience.


Tal (Chapter 94) - Wed 24 Feb 2010

Poor, poor Miroku... He should have admitted he has a cursed mind instead of a cursed hand.  For all his suaveness, he has yet to figure out a woman doesn't want to be told that your first thought when it came to flowers was "hey, let's be fruitful" instead of "hey, we're getting married!"

I've been lurking on this story, and really enjoying it.  :)  You're doing a great job!


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