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I love this story!

Another fabulous update...well, all of your pieces are awesome.

I love how you capture emotions and are able to translate them in your stories - I can almost feel Sesshoumaru and Kagome's pain at their loss of each other through their bond. Then Kagome manages to multi-task (like most women, hello!) and uses her bond and aura to sooth Sesshoumaru's poor lost mind and beast.

The interchange between Sugimi and Satori? Classic. Just as I pictured them. Not a whole lot of love lost there, is there?

You have to laugh at Sugimi's reaction to InuYasha and Nyoko's relationship. I'm sure she's not who Dad would have picked for his son...chuckle.

How wonderful. This story is just wonderful and just keeps getting better as it progresses. I loved Sigumi running from the woman. The personality you have given him is adorable. I like that he gets to spend time, however short it may be, with Inuyasha. He needs it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Poor Sess. I had hoped you wou;d have described what Nyoko would do to Sugimi for him to run away like that. Thanks for the update. sosa is in biiiig trouble.

omg all of the men in that famil enjoy females that make them nuts! love it!

WOW!! So a lot happens in this chapter and sets us up for a lot going on in the future. INu papa is in the big bad battle. LEts see how this turns out. it should def add another dimension that can have this turning out to be the most epic of all epic battles. The two almighty ones just have to pull their stuff together. I do like that you showed the extent of their emotions/feelings/bond for each other. They are one pair that it seems like you don't want to mess with so Im wondering after this preview how is the battle plan for the evil ones going to change? I can't wait to find out all the things you have concocted and created for us :)

Awesome story! Its by far one of my favorites on here. Great Job! Keep it up! I cant wait to see whats gonna happen!

Another exciting chapter!

I'm on pins and needles waiting for the next one!

Thank You!!!!!!!

Hey Ber!!! Do you mind if I call you Ber? LOL! I know you'll somehow tag me later for this. LOL! Great job on the chapter. You could really feel the pain and rage of the separation. You are truly awesome. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Sosa is sooo going to feel it when they come after him.

WOW!! That was one awesome chapter! Very well written, and I loved how you had Inupapa jump in to try to help Sesshomaru. I could feel the anguish both Kagome and Sesshomaru were going through with their bond being separated. I just wanted to cry!

Yay, Inuyasha gets to meet his dad, can't wait for that. Nor, can I wait to see how Kagome gets out of her trap. Hope you update again soon. Please, don't keep us in suspense too long, kay?

good to know what happened to kagome, sosa is SO going to pay for his incredibly ridiculously idiotic move and i'm cackling like a b movie mad scientist or wicked witch at the thought of what kagome's going to do and then just the idea of what sesshomaru will do, oh gosh...

they might need a new kami to replace sosa- maybe sesshomaru? that would be rather amusing, a youkai so controlled being the god of chaos and storms, very yin yang

O_O OMFG Sosa's gunna get it! man a pissy kagome AND a pissy Sess... hahahahahahahahahaha *cackles excitedly* *is s0o0o0o0o0oexcited!

Um so I'm going to freak out, then maybe say somehting constructive.

OH MY GOSH THAT WAS AMAZING I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT AND THEN SHE JUST AND THEN HE WENT ALL AND THEN OH MY GOOOOOOSH.

So it's been awhile since I've done that. Thanks for putting up with that.

Anyways, I really enjoyed this chapter. I've looked forwards to it since the last chapter you posted, what if such a master cliff hanger. I sat and looked at the computer for about a minute and just shook my head. "Oh no you didn't."

But you did.

And it was so very worth it.

The construction of the chapter was good. I believe that it feels unfinished, almost like a half chapter. Each chapter should have a mini arc itself; you do that task well usually.

The characterization and reactions were believable to me. The sudden development seemed timely to me, the smaller arc contributing to the greater one.

Anyhow, please update. I know you get that often, but I appreciate the time and effort you put into this. I check on it every day. :D

Wow. Heavy first chapter. so many emotions. Inuyasha's annoyed, and jealous over his dead brother. Sesshomaru died and his last message... intriguing. great job.

omg...... love it love it WANT MORE OF IT!!!

this first chapter makes me want to cry, cause i think about how kagome must feel when she finds out that sesshoumaru's dead. I WAS SO CLOSE TO TEARS JUST THEN.

I can't wait to see how this turns out or even how she is going to make things turn out. I mean she and Sesshoumaru got a bit of a hint when they went to the future and saw the seal (can't forget that) but putting the world back in balance...Kagome has her work cut out for her. Good always triumphs and you've given us a little sneak peak as to who gets who so now all we have to do is wait...did I mention I hate waiting :)

Uh oh. Where did Kagome go? Poor Sesshoumaru was left behind with no trace of his mate. I sure as heck wouldn't want to be around him after that little episode!

Nice to see that Sesshoumaru have a bit of insecurity as well and is not as perfect or icy as he tends to portray to those around him. It's good to see him a little more, how should I say?......HUMAN? Ouch! Probably wouldn't want to say that to his face.

Anyway, a wonderful update and always a pleasure to read your work. Now....just waiting on Wicked...... :)

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So mean TT3TT

*wiggles update bribery c0okies at you*

FIXIT!

And we are getting somewhere!! I really like how you are tieing in lots of things from the overall Inuyahsa story into your own personal story. I can't wait to see how things turnout and how everything goes down. Will the good guys have to win the battle first and then have the balance component figured out or will it matter. I guess I will be waiting for more :)

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