Reviews for Death's Decadence by Adelle

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Jin jin (Chapter 1) - Sun 24 Sep 2017

This first chapter was really enjoyable, I can't wait to reqd the rest.


Alashia (Chapter 12) - Wed 20 Sep 2017

Loving your story! Hope you will update soon. Cant wait to see what's going to happen next!


Askosh Mosey (Chapter 12) - Tue 19 Sep 2017

Don't tell me Kagome would not be able to be Sesshoumaru's mate due to her infertility, as Sesshoumaru would need a hire to continue his line. Worse, Sesshoumaru needs to take a concubine. I would sooner see Kagome take her own life than witnessing her being all unselfish and accepting it all just because of her love for Sesshoumaru, as in the other 100% fics where Kagome had to share Sesshoumaru with other women. Hate those overused scheme of mate sharing and concubines.

 

Poor Kagome T_T


Alanah (Chapter 12) - Tue 19 Sep 2017

Ohmygoodness, I wonder what's going to happen with Naraku... and Kagome! Wow, I can't even begin where to start! Hopefully she'll be okay after all of this!


Natalia (Chapter 12) - Tue 19 Sep 2017

This the second time I encounter this type of writing, writen in present tense and adding past and future, I will be honest for a second I thought this was written by alanah an favourite author I follow! It is very interesting! I enjoyed it! The writing style is unique!

Hope kagome will purge that drug from her system and will be able to have children!

Also so hoping for a happy ending! Please?

Thx for updating!


Crimson Rose (Chapter 12) - Tue 19 Sep 2017

Since Kagome can't have kids because of the drug, is that permanent even if they find a cure? 

 

Also so why isn't any youkai able to smell what Kag/Sess are doing?

 

please update soon! 


Alanah (Chapter 10) - Sat 09 Sep 2017

omg Kagura... was not expecting her! And hopefully Kagome gets cured!


Askosh Mosey (Chapter 9) - Mon 04 Sep 2017

How come a fic this damn good would end up unhapily? But why..? Please.. 

 

 

anyway, you don't know how relieved I was upon knowing Kagome wasn't raped. Although I still feel a tad disappointed that Sessh?maru still hasn't deemed Kagome worthy enough as a mate. Probably only after Kagome was gone would Sessh?maru know what a huge loss of a mistake he had made.


Alanah (Chapter 8) - Mon 04 Sep 2017

wow, you updated right when I'm trying to catch up on what I missed. Thanks for the updates!  Hopefully there is a cure for Kagome :(


ponpiri (Chapter 2) - Mon 04 Sep 2017

Is English not your first language? There's something strange going on with your sentence strutcure. You switch from 3rd person narrative to this weird incomplete conditional.

From this: Kagome laughed lightly

To this: Said hanyou would return/Some hours would pass

And also using "this" or "that" instead of "the" to describe a thing.

Some of this is incorrect grammar usage that messes up the flow of the sentence. Hopefully you can find a beta to fix these issues.

The story is OK. From the first chapter it was unclear if Kagome or her mother was going to marry into the family.


Jasmine (Chapter 8) - Sat 02 Sep 2017

Love the story its intriguing!


InuKami-Sama (Chapter 7) - Fri 01 Sep 2017

All I can say is ....wow...more please


Alanah (Chapter 7) - Fri 01 Sep 2017

I'm actually happy that Kagome wasn't raped, LOL. And Sesshoumaru is so doomed indeed!


Alanah (Chapter 7) - Thu 31 Aug 2017

Thanks for the quick update! I'll read this when I get home from work~


Yuna (Chapter 1) - Thu 31 Aug 2017

I'm still reading this because I like that Sesshoumaru is treating Kagome well. It still holds my attention and I hope it continue to do so. I am hoping there is no rape in the coming chapter and Sesshoumaru is able to help her in time but if he doesn't and she ends up being defile in the worse way. I will have to quit reading this. I don't think I can stomach it. 


Lisa (Chapter 6) - Thu 31 Aug 2017

I'm not reading any more. It was a good story up till now. I am so tire of every one haveing Kagome kindnap.   Can't anyone just write a good story dumping on Kagome.


Alanah (Chapter 6) - Thu 31 Aug 2017

Oh nooooooo! I hope Kagome will be safe! I can only imagine what will happen to her D:


Askosh Mosey (Chapter 6) - Thu 31 Aug 2017

Uh-oh. Is this the part where the rape is going to happen? >,<


Toni (Chapter 5) - Tue 29 Aug 2017

really enjoy your work  looking forward to more chapters 


Crimson Rose (Chapter 5) - Mon 28 Aug 2017

Aaaaah! I can't wait for the next update! I love this story. I can't wait to find out whatll happen to Kagome next. Sesshomaru seems so...sweetish but twisted. It's such an interesting story. 


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